Site Revival and a Photograph


Hey.

If anyone has this site on their friends page or whatever, their reaction is probably going to be "WOAH WHAT? That girl's still around?"

Yup I'm still around. I'm still writing too. But, you know, things pass in and out of interest. I just totally lost interest on going on livejournal. I was also kind of between writing projects for a while, so there wasn't much material to put here.

Anyway, the reason I've revived this blog is because I've been working on some pieces. Essays, I guess you can say. I've basically been expressing my emotions through writing in the simplest way I can. Speaking straightforwardly about feelings and events. It's a lot of fun, and it lends itself perfectly to a blog form so . . . I'm putting it in a blog.

This one was taken from a list of writing prompts my English teacher gave me. Not the most thrilling or deep thing ever, but a lot of fun to write.

 

Prompt: Recall a photograph from your life and describe it in a way that suggests (but doesn't specifically name) why it matters. )

 


Aaaand finally a page.



Not sure if I can call this a page. It's really short.

I'll try to keep the updates coming, but there are two things I need anyone who reads this to understand.
1) I'm busy. I'm a senior, which means college applications. I'm taking three AP courses. It's marching band season. I pretty much don't have any time whatsoever.
2) More importantly, writing something like this takes insane stamina. Last time I wrote a full-length book, I pretty much had to force myself to keep going after a certain point. I'm getting to that stage again. The story just loses it's excitement. And this particular story is even worse. It's LONG. It has several characters that I want to get in depth into and several subplots. In addition, I have several flaws as a writer, and after seeing those consistantly coming up, it's hard to keep gioing. My vision for this story is not matching the reality, and I know that it never will, and that makes it difficult to keep going. So please forgive me if the updates randomly stop one day. I may end up just emailing pages to one or two friends instead of posting something online--let me know if you'd want that.
 

New Page )


 

Chapter 1 Page 12 )

 

 

Chapter 1 Page 13 )

 

Chapter 1 Page 14 )

 

Chapter 1 Page 15 )

 

Chapter 1 Page 16 )
Chapter 2

 

Chapter 2 Page 1 )

 

 

 

Chapter 2 Page 3 )

 

Chapter 1 Page 4 )</div>

 

 

Chapter 2 Page 5 )</div></div> </div>

New Story


I'm sure you're all wondering why I dropped off the face of the earth . . . then again, maybe you aren't, since the whole reason I disappeared is because one person read the story, and she was a real life friend.

Anyway, I have a new story going, and the site I'm posting it on isn't working very well, so I'll post all I have up so far here as a backup. Maybe if you have some free time you can check it out, leave some comments :)

 

Prelude )

 

Chapter 1 page 1 )

 

Chapter 1 page 2 )

 

Chapter 1 page 3 )

 

Read more... )</div>

 

 

Chapter 1 page 5 )

 

Chapter 1 page 6 )

 

Chapter 1 page 7 )

 

Chapter 1 page 8 )

 

Chapter 1 page 9 )

 

Chapter 1 page 10 )

 

Chapter 1 page 11 )

Future of the Site


This post is for anyone wondering what has happened to this site.  Quite simply, it died, and there are a couple reasons for this.

1. I'm just not interested in the story now.  Editing is a drag.  I came home tired from camp and found I just didn't have the desire to work on it.
2. I have another writing project that I'm currently fairly deep into that I'm a lot more excited about.
3. Only one person is reading and leaving comments.  That gives the impression that not many people actually care about this story.
4. SitA was bad.  The writing style was much too terse; there were too many subplots that made the story convoluted later on; and the story jumped around too often.  Those are only a few problems SitA had.  It would take a lot of work to fix it, work that I just don't want to put in right now.

I still love SitA.  It was the first novel I ever finished and so is pretty close to my heart.  And there were a few good things about it.  I just don't think it has much of a future.

As for the future of this site, there are a few options, and at this moment only God knows what I'll choose.  I'll either:

1. Never post here again.
2. Finish my current project (tentatively titled Empowered) and then post that.
3. Post Empowered here after finished and editing the first 50 pages or so. 

I'm leaning toward #3, though #1 is also likely.  #2 is what I did with SitA, and it didn't work, so that probably won't happen.  Whatever happens, I'll post in a couple of months to let you all know.  I'll also post on my lj, in an email to people I know in real life, maybe Facebook (if I'm posting a story and I want new readers) and probably a few other places, so don't feel a need to obsessively check this.

I'm sorry to anyone who liked SitA, and hope if I post another project, you'll be able to forgive me and read again.  I'll see you in a few months! 
 

Update


and to think i almost forgot....

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Update


New Page )

Page 11


I'm posting a little early because I'll be so busy tomorrow I'm afraid I'll forget.  Lots of announcements today.

On Sunday (7/20) I'll be leaving for another two weeks at my summer camp, followed by a short family vacation in Quebec.  I won't be home until 8/7.  Providing I'm not too busy packing and such tomorrow to edit them, there will be pages on 7/22, 7/26, and 7/29, updated by the awesome Bessie.  If there is a shortage of pages, I'll just tell her to alert you all.  After that, Bessie will also be away, there will be a one-week hiatus, and the story will start again on 8/9.  

Now that that's out of the way.  A farily long page today because I didn't want to break it up.  This page ends a scene, next pages go back to Rahn (I spent a while trying to figure out if I really wanted scenes to jump back and forth like that.  Couldn't come to a good answer.  Decided in the end to just keep it chronological.  Still not sure if I like it, though).  It's a fairly important page, as it explains just why the arisaid is important, and Bahnica's speach on it has undergone lots of rewrites.  Hope you enjoy.

       

Page 10


And here's the page, though a bit belated.  It contains the first use of the title in the story, and a revelation that really shouldn't be too surprising.  Also, 10th page, which is kind of landmarky, I guess.  Party.

Page 9


Bessie here bringing you today's page...

Here goes nuthin...

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